swaffelaar

Age/Gender: 19, Male
Location: Eindhoven
Job: Student

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Score: 9
Project Retribution

"so many girls :3"

date: October 8, 2009

Firstly, I don't know why he is fighting.
Like 30 girlz around you: I would do them all!
And as they're so fast and sportive, they must be looking good too! (as long they don't do their freaky transform/ability stuff)
Secondly, your stickstyle is fast and with a lot of action. But because most parts contain just fast constant fighting, I got quite bored. Somehow you try to avoid this with text and breaks which contains a kind of a story.
Thirdly, I like the informal guy-girl conversations.
Fourthly, if I got hit with only 1 punch, I'd be f*ckin dead. Don't like to be dead, prefer beer.

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Score: 10
D-Fence the Game...

"addictive"

date: June 26, 2009

i got to lvl40 or something, upgraded everything, about 700 employees
the enemy even doesnt get the chance touching my 4 star barricade :P
so its get a bit boring after a while watching how ur cannons and guards shoot the enemy like chickens in the open. :P

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Score: 1
Tribute 2 Michael Jackson

"roflmfao"

date: June 26, 2009

whahahahaa!
it is so bad i had to laugh :P
I love it when idiots film themselves acting stupid
thats why i give u a 10!!
but cuz it isnt a flash, youll have to be satisfied with 1 star

PS were u drunk when you decided to film this and put this on ng? i just cant believe that ... well whatever

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Score: 9
- Rain -

"wauw"

submission: - Rain -
date: June 9, 2009

excellent animations.
1: though, in the beginning when cain walks, he walks a bit strange i think. id prefer the walking part of the girl. like that its also easier :P
2: i love the pianomusic. do you know where i can find the sheets? id like to play it by myself on the piano.
3: you indeed should make a serie! id like to c the end and off course what this story is about. (i still dont really understand the story, its a bit confusing)

but after all, im eager to c the sequals!

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Score: 10
Paper's edge

"oh yeah"

submission: Paper's edge
date: May 29, 2009

i dont get the green part
but anyways: i love the oldskool way of making a movie!

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Score: 6
DMT:How to read music/tab

"simple"

date: May 25, 2009

the basics of reading sheetpaper, though still too simple i think
but well, its difficult to explain everything in 1 flash. if you plan to make any sequels, you may indeed go with more details or with different subjects etc.
if so, i would give you a 10 ;)
oh yeh, the graphics are nice

the B# etc does exist under certain circumstances, it depends on which music scale youre playing (one with lots of # for instance) or when the componist uses a certain modulation. (sorry, cant give you the exact music scale, i dont have a piano at my room, its at home)

i agree with the review below, some interactive things would improve very much: people tend to remember things better when theyve really done something, not by reading.

anyway, a nice try!
hope you make more, making more people to understand music (kind of)

May 25, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks! I didn't really want to go over anyone's head with this, but maybe it was too simple. This is the only "basic" tutorial in the line, the rest are pretty in depth. I have a lot of interactivity planned, so hopefully you like the next ones better!

Thanks for the review and information!

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Score: 10
War, Snow and Fire

"reminds me of eragon :D"

submission: War, Snow and Fire
date: May 19, 2009

i very much like the animations style, just like paper chase.
cant wait for more!

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